The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied bar chart indicates the

amount

of enjoyable

hobby

time

spent by

men

and

women

of

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various hiring positions. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest

amount

of

leisure

time

enjoyed

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is enjoyed

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by unemployed

men

.

However

, females did not spend

hobby

time

in

full

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time

jobs which is the lowest

proportion

of

leisure

time

. Unemployed

men

spend approximately 85% of their

time

in entertainment, (which is the highest

proportion

of

hobby

time

over the period) just ahead of retired

men

with nearly 82%

leisure

time

spent.

Moreover

, the

amount

of entertainment for unemployed

women

is the same as retired females

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for roughly 79% of

leisure

time

.

In contrast

, the

proportion

of spare

time

for

women

who

works

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in

full

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time

jobs is just over a third. (which is the lowest

amount

of

leisure

time

over the whole year).

Furthermore

, the

amount

of

hobby

time

for housewives is a bit as much as the

proportion

of spare

time

for employed

women

in

part

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time

jobs,

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at 50% and 40%, respectively.