The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrations depict the problem of flooding in a United Kingdon city and two available options to improve the drawbacks.
Overall
, the Linking Words
river
up flaws to the town when the two rivers get combined and the ultimate two solutions are demonstrated along showing one idea moving the places including the residential area near the flooding spot away from the Use synonyms
River
B stepping Use synonyms
backward
and another one making the dams in each side of the Change the spelling
backwards
river
.
The defect of the town is that the water from the Use synonyms
river
overflows near the residential area, Use synonyms
river
A and Use synonyms
river
B meeting up together. solution one is moving the facilities and areas Use synonyms
such
as parks, buildings, and residential areas will maintain the rivers whilst changing the locations of the buildings and parks.
The second solution for the shortcomings is leaving the places alone, Linking Words
however
, changing a difference in the Linking Words
river
by building a dam protecting the water overflowing down from the Use synonyms
river
and causing a flawed. Use synonyms
This
will preserve the town Linking Words
nevertheless
it has to stop the Linking Words
river
flowing from it.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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