The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The picture depicts the flooding issue in a UK town and
propose
two possible answers to Change the verb form
proposes
this
problem.
To commence, the flooding problem primarily affects the residental
area located on the north Correct your spelling
residential
side
of river
Capitalize word
River
B
and west
Correct article usage
the west
side
of River
A. Moreover
, at the sout
Correct your spelling
south
side
of River
Add a comma
B,
B
there are commercial buildings, while
and
industrial park is found on the east Correct your spelling
an
side
of River
A. However
, in order to alleviate the flood, the information reveals several possible solutions.
First and foremost, is to move the residential area and the industrial park away from the northern section of the
Correct article usage
apply
River
B
as well as
relocate commercial buildings further
from the southern bank of the same river
. This
approach aims to reduce the risk of flooding by increasing the distance between these vulnerable structures and the river
.
Alternatively, the second option suggest
constructing dams at two strategic locations: one at the northern end of Change the verb form
suggests
River
A to create a water reservoir and another at the western end of River
B
. This
would help to manage water flow and provide buffer
against potential flooding.
To encapsulate, Add an article
a buffer
while
the flooding area is located near the
Correct article usage
apply
River
B
, the propose
two solutions, Wrong verb form
proposed
such
as relocating vulnerable buildings and constructing dams, offer viable ways to mitigate the risk and protect the community.Submitted by rasendrya.hafiz on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, river, b with synonyms.
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