The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture depicts the flooding issue in a UK town and
propose
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two possible answers to
this
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problem. To commence, the flooding problem primarily affects the
residental
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residential
area located on the north
side
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of
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river
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River
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B
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and
west
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the west
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side
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of
River
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A.
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, at the
sout
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south
side
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of
River
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B,
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B
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there are commercial buildings,
while
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and
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an
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industrial park is found on the east
side
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of
River
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A.
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, in order to alleviate the flood, the information reveals several possible solutions. First and foremost, is to move the residential area and the industrial park away from the northern section of
the
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River
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B
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as well as
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relocate commercial buildings
further
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from the southern bank of the same
river
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.
This
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approach aims to reduce the risk of flooding by increasing the distance between these vulnerable structures and the
river
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. Alternatively, the second option
suggest
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constructing dams at two strategic locations: one at the northern end of
River
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A to create a water reservoir and another at the western end of
River
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B
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.
This
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would help to manage water flow and provide
buffer
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against potential flooding. To encapsulate,
while
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the flooding area is located near
the
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apply
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River
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B
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, the
propose
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two solutions,
such
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as relocating vulnerable buildings and constructing dams, offer viable ways to mitigate the risk and protect the community.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, river, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flood barriers
  • levees
  • drainage systems
  • water runoff
  • low-lying areas
  • urban areas
  • vulnerable areas
  • spill over
  • geographical layout
  • enhancement
  • infrastructure
  • effectiveness
  • drawbacks
  • maintenance
  • local ecosystem
  • immediate protection
  • significant maintenance
  • physical alteration
  • longer-term benefits
  • critical locations
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