The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The two diagrams illustrate the percentages of employment of people aged 60-64 in four different nations in 1970 and 2000, broken down into gender.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that male employees were nearly doubled that of women on average, whereas
that
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of
trends among Change preposition
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four
countries were somewhat similar in both sexes. Correct article usage
the four
However
, it is interesting to note that Japanese
elderly were the largely employed than any other Correct article usage
the Japanese
countries
.
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To begin
with, a closer look at the bar chart show
that men from four countries were employed over 70% in 1970. At 84%, Japan accounted for the highest percentages of senior male Correct subject-verb agreement
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the other
region
, followed by Belgium at 79%, and Australia and Change to a plural noun
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USA
at 74% and 73%, respectively. Surprisingly, the figures in on Correct article usage
the USA
decline
in 2000, where male Correct article usage
the decline
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Belgian
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staffs
dramatically dropped to 19%, Fix the agreement mistake
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while
that of in Japan experienced a slight fall at 76%. The other two: USA and Australia, were only 55%, and 47%.
With regards to female employments
, it is noticeable that the figures were roughly halved that of men, Japan and Belgium still remained at their first and Fix the agreement mistake
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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