The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams above illustrate the development of a
village
in Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. To facilitate readers' understanding, all pictures used are attached with an explanation.
According to
the illustrations, the development of the
village
can be described in two key phases: in the first period(1780-1860), the
population
gradually increased with large sections of farmland disappearing; in the second period(1860-2000), the
population
exploded and many infrastructures were constructed. During the first phase, the
population
in the
village
slowly rose from 100 homes in 1780 to 200 homes in 1860. Contrary to the common that the growth of
population
is accompanied by the increase of farmland, by 1860, the area of farms had been halved compared to that in 1780.
In addition
, people constructed a bridge linking the western and the eastern parts of the
village
. In the second phase, the
population
was under a rapid expansion, reaching 500 homes by 2000.
Accordingly
, the inhabitants there set up a living area to accommodate the new
population
, including two schools and three sports fields. Five shops established along the river were to the west of the living area.
Furthermore
, local people
also
spared a wetland for birds which was located
at the end
of the river.
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