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Some people think that companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers. Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work? What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for sales positions?

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Other people believe that money is a driving force that motivates an individual to
work
 hard and be dedicated
on
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 their job.
Thus
, big industries think that they must hire money-driven applicants. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the importance of money
on
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employment
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the employment
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 industry yet
disagrees
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 on monetary motivation as a source of driving force on an employee.
Firstly
, financial gain is the main reason why an individual goes to
work
.
However
, research suggests that it is not purely through income that energizes the
person
 to
work
 hard on the job.
Secondly
, there are several factors that must be considered
that
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increases
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increase
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work
 productivity
such
 as
healthy
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a healthy
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work
 environment and culture.
For instance
,
high paying
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 institutions have
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an increase
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increase
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 trend of resignation and less productivity from their employees.
Thus
,
this
 means that financial incentives
is
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 not an assurance for driving force or dedication on the
person
. On one hand, other factors
such
 as
healthy
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a healthy
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 employer-employee
relationship
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relationships
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 can be a good indicator
for
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of
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hardwork
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hard work
 and dedication
on
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in
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 an individual.
Furthermore
, the
empoyer
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employer
 must look for qualities that are
aminable
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amenable
amiable
 for employment in
sales
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the sales
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 industry.
Additionally
, companies must hire individuals that are qualified
such
 as
healthy
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a healthy
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 attitude, fit
on
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in
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sales
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the sales
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 environment and team player.
Thus
, each
qualities
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quality
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 can both be beneficial to the company and the employee. If the salesperson is a
teamplayer
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team player
,
this
 means a
person
 is willing to do things which
is
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are
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 positive for
the
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 greater number of people rather than individual gains. In conclusion, there are several factors that can motivate a
person
 to
work
 not just
by
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financial gain alone.
Furthermore
, employers must hire individuals who are qualified
on
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for
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 the job.
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