The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart compares the
expenses
on
5 areas made by people who Change preposition
in
live
in four countries in 2009. Wrong verb form
lived
Overall
, housing was the category with the highest expenses
whereas
healthcare and clothing were significantly lower than other categories.
The US had the highest share of expenditure on housing with just above a quarter. Followed by the UK which allocated for
slightly below a quarter. Change preposition
apply
Canada
and Japan's housing expenses
were around 20%.
Japan accounted approximately
23% of Change preposition
for approximately
expenses
for food. Moreover
, the UK had one out of five share of food expenses
. Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Canada
and the US spent less than 15% for
food. Change preposition
on
Canada
had 20% of expenses
made for transportation Correct article usage
the expenses
whereas
the other regions ony
spent less than 20%.
Correct your spelling
only
In contrast
, the expenditure for both healthcare and clothing did not reach 10% in all countries. The highest spend to
healthcare was made by the US with 7%. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
, Canada
spent just above 5% in
clothing.Change preposition
on
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