The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparison where relevan

The aim of

this

report is to describe the statistics of four Asian

countries

' populations which live in

cities

. The whole graph illustrates the upward tendency of the

percentage

of

people

living in

cities

. During the first two years shown in the

data

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it can be seen that the

number

of

citizens

was increasing. Malaysians were the ones who really actively moved to

cities

. In 1970 the

number

of

people

reached only 30%,

nonetheless

during the next decade the

proportion

of

citizens

soared even 10%. The

number

of

people

living in the

Philippines

and

Indonesia

went up only by approximately 2%.

Overall

,

people

from

Thailand

were the ones who did not dramatically change their place of living. The

percentage

of

people

living in the

city

almost remained stable over a

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period

. The more vivid fluctuation can be observed during the next decade. Far more

Indonisians

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Indonesians

started living in the

cities

. Compared to 1970, in 2000 the

number

of

citizens

rocketed by almost

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half. the

percentage

of

people

living in the

cities

in

Thailand

remained unchanged over the

period

from 1990 to 2000.

However

, the

proportion

of

people

living in the

cities

of

Philippines

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dramatically plummeted. it went down by nearly

one fifth

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compared to 1970.

Malaysia

was the only country which experienced a vivid increase in the

number

of

citizens

. The third decade of the given graph depicts a great upward trend in

Indonesia

and

Malaysia

. The

percentage

of

people

living in the

cities

of both

countries

went up by almost 20%.

Nevertheless

,

Thailand

differs from these

countries

because the

proportion

of

population

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living in towns rocketed only by ¼ compared to

previous

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year. The

number

of

citizens

in

Thailand

during the

period

of 2010 and 2020 remained stable. Over the next

ten year

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period

it is predicted that the

number

of

people

living in the

cities

will markedly soar. It is thought that the most active increase will be in

Thailand

and the

Philippines

. In

Thailand

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the

proportion

of

city

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population will reach 50% and in the

Philippines

10% more. The less dramatic growth of

citizens

is predicted for

Indonesia

and

Malaysia

. The form for the

city

population will climb only by 5% in both

countries

. In conclusion, the

number

of

people

living in the towns in the

countries

of the

Philippines

and

Thailand

were

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extremely fluctuating.

Hence

, the

proportion

of

city

populations in

Malaysia

and

Indonesia

never went down.