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The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

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The bar graph compares the distribution of expenditures across five major categories- housing, food, transportation, health care, and clothing- in the United
States
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,
Canada
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, the United
Kingdom
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, and
Japan
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 for the year 2009
Overall
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, it is evident that housing expenses in the United
States
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 accounted for the largest share,
whereas
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 healthcare costs in the United
Kingdom
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 represented the smallest proportion. In terms of food expenditure,
Japan
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 stood out with approximately 24%, surpassing the United
Kingdom
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's 20%.
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,
while
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Canada
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's spending on food reached just 15%, it remained higher than the United
Kingdom
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's, which was around 13%.
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, the percentage of housing in the United
States
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 showed the highest number of 26%, slightly higher than those of
Canada
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, the United
Kingdom
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, and
Japan
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 from 21% to 24%.
In contrast
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, transportation expenses in
Japan
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 accounted for only 10%, which was significantly less than the figures for the United
States
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, the United
Kingdom
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, and
Canada
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, each of which exceeded
Japan
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 by 5% to 10%.
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, healthcare expenditure in the United
Kingdom
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 was the smallest among all categories, with a mere 2%.
By comparison
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,
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 allocated around 5% each to healthcare, still below the 7%
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 in the United
States
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. Clothing expenditures showed minimal variation, with percentages of approximately 4%, 6%, 5%, and 4% in the United
States
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Canada
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, the United
Kingdom
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, and
Japan
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, respectively

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words states, canada, kingdom, japan with synonyms.
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