The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
The provided bar chart demonstrates the
amount
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of
households
in owned and rented houses in two countries over a
period
between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, it is shown from the chart that
households
were used less in owned accommodation during the
period
between 1918 and 1961,
however
, they were utilized more in owned homes between 1981 and 2011.
It is clear that
households
in rented places used the most during the
period
shown, by approximately 80% in 1918.
Whereas
, it is the least in 2001, by just 30%.
While
the percentage of using
households
in owned houses had a significant rise in 2001, reaching a peak at around 70%, both owned and hired places toughly remained in 1971, by 50%.
Although
the
households
in
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owned one have a downward trend, the hired one experienced an upward trend during the
period
given. Totally, a glance at the graph reveals that both trends look like to be about vice versa.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • rental accommodation
  • economic conditions
  • housing policies
  • cultural shifts
  • historical events
  • supply and demand
  • demographic shifts
  • urbanization
  • patterns
  • trends over time
  • housing market dynamics
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