The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and marker comparisons where relevant
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The given line graph depicts the proportion of holidaymakers, who
visted
four Correct your spelling
visited
distict
Correct your spelling
distinct
district
attraction
, Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
incuding
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including
art
gallery,pavilion, pier, and festival in Brighten in England over two decades.
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an art
Overall
, visiting pavilion
was Correct article usage
the pavilion
the
popular Correct article usage
a
attractions
among visitors and despite, its steady trend over Fix the agreement mistake
attraction
period
, Correct article usage
the period
festival
saw more holidaymakers, compared to other destinations. Art Add an article
the festival
gallery
, Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
on the other hand
, had the lowest visitors
during Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
this
period.
According to
the line grapg
, in 1980, art Correct your spelling
graph
gallery
had just over 20 Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
percent
, which rose to nearly below 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. After that, it fell sharply to 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. between 1990 and 2000, there was almost a steady trend, which declined dramatically to approximately 9 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. In 1980, the percentage of visiting Change the spelling
per cent
pier
was 10 Correct article usage
the pier
percent
, after which it saw a slight fluctuation Change the spelling
per cent
then
it reach
Wrong verb form
reached
to
just over 20 Change preposition
apply
percent
.
In 1995, there was a peak of roughly 48 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the ratio of pavilion visitors Change the spelling
per cent
then
it had a sharp fall
in 2010.Submitted by sahar.moti1994 on
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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