The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart indicates the data on the distribution of
water
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consumption in various sectors in Australia in 2004;
while
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the bar demonstrates the
water
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usage of residents.
Overall
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, it is clear to see that a term of establishment has a higher expenditure than another when compared; alternatively, government and other sectors are quite lower but not the most.
In addition
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, bathrooms and gardens are the greatest number of residential aqua usage.
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with, the largest total of aqua consumption is houses which is only 57%; meanwhile, in the apartment quarter is still more than in another section with only 13% of
water
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expenditure. Businesses and industries have quantities of aqua benefits of about 10% and the lowest percentage is government and others that less than 10%. Especially, in residential the most beneficial is a bathroom and garden approximately close to 30%;
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, only 20% of
water
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expenses for washing clothes.
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, the smallest percentage is toilet and kitchen with around 10-15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • water usage
  • distribution
  • sector
  • consumers
  • patterns
  • residential
  • industrial
  • agricultural
  • sustainability
  • conservation
  • allocation
  • efficiency
  • policy change
  • discrepancies
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