You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

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Dear Sir/Madam My Name is Mubi and I have attended

job

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interview for Medical Administrator Position. I am very delighted to inform you that I accept your Job offer and I would like to request you written Offer letter. As I am currently on the notice period until Friday, October 25, 2024, So I will

able

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to start at your clinic by Monday, October 28, 2024.

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, if your company is comfortable with these settlements, I will definitely join by the end of October. I want to learn more about your clinic, So I am willing to do Online courses and complete my orientation.

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addition

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I will

foward

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forward

my degree and certificates for

you

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your

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referrence

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reference

. If you have

further

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inquiry

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inquiries

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or require additional

document

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documents

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, I can

be reach

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via email. I am very enthusiastic to start my new job and

getting

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involved in your clinic. I anticipate,

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and awaits

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awaits

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your positive response. Sincerely, Mubi

mubassirakolia78Tue Oct 15 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to develop a more structured format by separating different points into distinct paragraphs for better clarity.

task achievement

Avoid repeating similar expressions, and ensure consistency in language use, such as 'forward' instead of 'foward' and 'reference' instead of 'referrence'.

task achievement

The writer successfully provided key information like job acceptance, start date, and willingness to learn more through online courses.

task achievement

A polite and respectful tone is maintained throughout the letter, which is suitable for professional communication.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
acceptance
position offered
start date
flexibility
documentation
enthusiasm
commitments
contribute
team
offer letter
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