You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord.

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Dear landlord, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to tell you that my job location has been Changed.

Therefore

, I am moving out

from

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this

place next week.I would like to

thankyou

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thank you

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for the support I

get

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have gotten

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from your side

while

staying

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your room

from

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for

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last

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the last

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one

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apply

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year.

Furthermore

, I miss

this

place because I have decorated my room with beautiful wallpapers and

sceneries

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scenery

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Besides

this

, You know I am

foodie

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a foodie

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so I will miss my favourite food too.

In addition

this

, I want to inform you that one of my close

friend

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friends

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want

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to come

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our city next month and he is

also

looking to rent a place. If you are willing to lease

this

room to my friend I will share your contact number and email. Looking forward to hearing from you . yours faithfully,

Navdeeop

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Navdeep

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider breaking your ideas into separate paragraphs for clarity. For example, the first paragraph can focus on your departure, and the second on the potential rental arrangement with your friend.

Task Achievement

Add more details about your friend's preferences or needs for the apartment. This can show your awareness of the task requirement.

Task Achievement

You have politely and clearly expressed your gratitude to the landlord, which is a suitable writing tone for this type of letter.

Coherence and Cohesion

You included a greeting and closing, providing a professional structure to your letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

146 words

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You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord.

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