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he bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

he bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
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The bar chart provides key information about the expenditures for five major goods in the various world regions during 2009. The
unites
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 were measured in percentages.
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, it is clear from the graph that housing had the highest value in all countries, representing approximately a quarter of the total.
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,
Food
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 and transportation
were
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both had a notable
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percentage
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 compared to others,
whereas
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 clothing and health care both had a minimal ratio.
According to
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 what is shown, Japan had spent more money
in
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food
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 and housing about 22% but less than 5%
in
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 clothing and health care.
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, expenditures in
Canda
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Canada
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 were most in housing and transportation near
to
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20%
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food
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 spending
were
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 15%. In terms of
United
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the United
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 Kingdom, Housing was the major part with about 24%
spending
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of spending
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,
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food
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and food
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 and transportation represented 20% and 15%, respectively.
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,
United
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the United
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 States spent the highest value
in
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on
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 housing among all groups where the second major category was
food
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