In
recent climate, technology has become an indispensable part of our life.
as part of
technology are widely popular among adolescents . I, for one, subscribe to
convincing theory that the potential drawbacks of playing
overshadow its possible advantages.
It is undeniable that youngsters can
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some features of playing
. Playing some
would be beneficial for boosting their knowledge and skills in specific areas.
, if they play
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, they would learn about professional techniques and strategies in Football.
, develop skills
as
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and critical thinking in order to
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the team properly.
,
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is provided
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some online
which give youth
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with ones who have shared interests.
, these tempting merits pale beside
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of devoting time to gaming. Winning in virtual battles
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the sense of achievement.
,
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releases dopamine which is one of the hormones for happiness. If people become addicted to
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unreal achievements, they
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have
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dopamine resistance, which is a state
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thatCorrect pronoun usage
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people cannot enjoy
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small pleasant moments of life.
, insufficient physical activities and
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screen time will bring about knock-on effects on both physical and mental health. Gamers are in danger of back and neck problems
the lone sedentary time.
,
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of interactions with real friends leads to isolation and mental disorders.
From what has been discussed, it can
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that negative aspects eclipse the merits of playing
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youngsters. Despite privileges, the detrimental impacts on
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and social life of teenagers are significant issues that cannot be overlooked.