The bar chart below shows employment figures in different tourism-related industries between 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart disporting information about work opportunities figures in several exploration-related industries between 2009 and 2019.
Overall
, the data is numerous and divided into some categories which are sports, travel, culture
(museums, galleries,etc.), Food and Hotel. However
, all the industries have shown moderate growth , except culture
.
Initially
, in 2009 the hotel sector had the most employment
with 299.2 employees whereas
, the sports and food industry had around 284 employed people. Therefore
, travel and culture
had significantly low employment
rates with 60.9 and 82.8 respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2019 the Food industry turned the table and became the most grown sector with 357.7. In addition
, sports and hotel also
increased drastically with 345.7 and 306 respectively. Last
but not least, the travel industry gained a small increment in starts by 114.7 while
, culture
is the only one where the employment
number decreased to 77.4. The resulting Breakdown is that the total Employment
in 2009 was 1000 and further
these work opportunities then
increased up to 1200.Submitted by raokaifxc on
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