The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the
proportion
of
water
used for different purposes in six
areas
of the world, including North
America
,South
America
,Europe,Africa,Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
.
Overall
the
percentage
of
agriculture
used in the four
areas
is the biggest.
By contrast
,two
areas
of the
percentage
of
water
used for
agriculture
is less than half. It is clear from the pie chart that the
proportion
of used
water
for
agriculture
accounts for 39% and 32% in North
America
and Europe,they do not achieve than half.
On the other hand
,the figure for the
percentage
of
water
used for industrial is around 50%.
Besides
,the figure for the
proportion
of
water
used for domestic take around 15% in two
areas
of the world. The
percentage
of used
water
for
agriculture
from the other four
areas
accounts for the highest
proportion
(South
America
,Africa,Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
were 71%,84%,88% and 81% respectively).The
proportion
of used
water
for industrial and domestic which make up both less than agricultural used are total roughly quarter. The
percentage
of used
water
for
agriculture
from the other four
areas
accounts for the highest
proportion
(South
America
,Africa,Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
were 71%,84%,88% and 81% respectively).The
proportion
of used
water
for industrial and domestic which make up both less than agricultural used are total roughly quarter.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, water, areas, america, asia, percentage, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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