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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
proportion
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 of
water
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 used for different purposes in six
areas
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 of the world, including North
America
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,South
America
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,Europe,Africa,Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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 the
percentage
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 of
agriculture
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 used in the four
areas
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 is the biggest.
By contrast
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,two
areas
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 of the
percentage
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 of
water
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 used for
agriculture
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 is less than half. It is clear from the pie chart that the
proportion
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 of used
water
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 for
agriculture
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 accounts for 39% and 32% in North
America
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 and Europe,they do not achieve than half.
On the other hand
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,the figure for the
percentage
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 of
water
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 used for industrial is around 50%.
Besides
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,the figure for the
proportion
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 of
water
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 used for domestic take around 15% in two
areas
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 of the world. The
percentage
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 of used
water
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 for
agriculture
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 from the other four
areas
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 accounts for the highest
proportion
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(South
America
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,Africa,Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 were 71%,84%,88% and 81% respectively).The
proportion
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 of used
water
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 for industrial and domestic which make up both less than agricultural used are total roughly quarter. The
percentage
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 of used
water
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 for
agriculture
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 from the other four
areas
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 accounts for the highest
proportion
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(South
America
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,Africa,Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 were 71%,84%,88% and 81% respectively).The
proportion
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 of used
water
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 for industrial and domestic which make up both less than agricultural used are total roughly quarter.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, water, areas, america, asia, percentage, agriculture with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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