The pie charts below describe the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two pie graphs illustrate the proportion of the sales for a retail centre in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. The biggest percentages were dedicated to travel and film/music in 2003 and 2013, respectively.
On the contrary
, the lowest amount was for books and clothes in these years.
The books had 19% of the total sales in 2003 and increased by 3 percent in 2013. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
clothes'
Change noun form
clothes
sale
experienced a decline Fix the agreement mistake
sales
by
roughly 8 Change preposition
of
percent
. It had almost a quarter of the total Change the spelling
per cent
sellings
in 2003. Correct your spelling
selling
On the other hand
, film and music proportions had the highest increase from 21% to 33% in 2013.
It can be seen that the greatest amount of sales belonged to Linking Words
travel
option, but it changed to media-related products over these 10 years. Products related to travellingCorrect article usage
the travel
,
covered approximately two-thirds of the pie chart in 2003 and changed to a little more than a quarter in 2013.Remove the comma
apply
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