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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The graph and table illustrate global
water
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consumption
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 across three sectors—agriculture, industrial
use
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, and domestic
use
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—between 1900 and 2000,
as well as
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 a comparison of
water
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 usage in
Brazil
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 and the Democratic Republic of
Congo
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 in the year 2000. The graph shows a steep rise in agricultural
water
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use
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 after 1950, which far surpasses both industrial and domestic
consumption
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. By 2000, agricultural
use
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 reached nearly 3,000 km³,
while
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 industrial
use
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 clime steadily but remained under 1,000 km³. Domestic
use
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 remains the lowest, increasing only slightly. The table provides a snapshot of
water
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consumption
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 in
Brazil
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 and
Congo
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 in 2000.
Brazil
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, with a much larger population (176 million), uses significantly more
water
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 per person (359 m³) and has much more irrigated land (26,500 km²) than
Congo
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.
In contrast
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,
Congo
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’s population of 5.2 million consume just 8 m³ per person, with only 100 km² of irrigated land. In summary, global
water
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consumption
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 is dominated by agriculture.
According to
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 presented
data
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data,
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Brazil
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 consumes more
water
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 per person more than 40 times (353
square
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 meters) than Kongo (8
square
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 meters),
additionally
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, there is 26500
square
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 km of irrigation land there,
while
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 the Republic of
Congo
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 has only 100
square
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 kilometres.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, consumption, use, brazil, congo, square with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • distribution
  • agriculture
  • industry
  • domestic
  • sector
  • trends
  • discrepancies
  • sustainability
  • resource management
  • environmental impact
  • efficient
  • scarce
  • irrigation
  • desalination
  • sanitation
  • water-intensive
  • renewable resource
  • per capita
  • infrastructure
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