Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. ag
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The pie charts give data about ways of transportation to one university for work,
study
in 2004 and 2009 in the UK.
Correct word choice
and study
Overall
, in five years only percentage
of people who used Correct article usage
the percentage
car
Correct article usage
a car
were
decreased and Unnecessary verb
apply
other
categories increased.
In 2004, Correct article usage
the other
Proportion
of car users was the highest , 51 per Correct article usage
the Proportion
cent
, but it declined and showed 28 per cent
in 2009. Second
Correct article usage
The second
popular
kind of transport was Correct quantifier usage
most popular
bus
with 33 per Correct article usage
the bus
cent
in 2004. In this
year, bicycle method of transportation for 9 per cent
, Correct article usage
the relatively
relatively
percentage of walking and travelling Change the word
relative
on
train were 4 and 3 per Change preposition
by
cent
.
In 2009, bus
amounted to almost half of Correct article usage
the bus
methods
, 46 per Add an article
the methods
cent
. Proportion
of cycling changed significantly Add an article
The proportion
16
per Change preposition
by 16
cent
, became more for
7 per Change preposition
by
cent
. There was
4% Correct subject-verb agreement
were
of
travelling Change preposition
apply
on
train, Change preposition
by
also
, 6% of
walking which Change preposition
apply
are
more for few per Correct subject-verb agreement
is
cent
than it was five years ago.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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