Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion. nbb

Methods of transportation to university for people to work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the United Kingdom. The two pie charts collate five categories of travelling

percentage

of

university

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the university

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train

, bicycle,

bus

, walking,

car

in 2004 and 2009 In 2004,

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the pie

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chart shows

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percentage

of travelling by

car

more than others. Travelling by

car

had half of all per cent.

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,

collected

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one

third travelling

percentage

by

bus

. After

bus

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, a few people voted to bicycle. It is

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above

one

from ten.

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at the end

of

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comes walking and

train

. In 2009, by looking pie chart travelling

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bus

was more than others. Travelling

with

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bus

had above half of all per cent. In 2004, travelling by

car

was more, but in 2009, travelling by

car

had

one

third.

Furthermore

, cycling has almost doubled from the previous

one

.

Also

in 2004, travelling by

train

and walking was

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lowest, in 2009, travelling by

train

and walking did not change.