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The bar chart represents information about households in owned and rented accommodations in England and Wales in the period from 1918 to 2011.

Overall

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, the rented accommodations were popular at

first,

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but it continued with a downward trend.

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, the number of owned accommodations grew

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rapidly by having significant

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with rented ones. In 1918 the percentage of owned accommodation was only more than 20 per

cent

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, but

proportion

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of rented one was three times more approximately 78 per

cent

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this

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value generally decreased until 2001, in that year it was 31 per

cent

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proportion

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of owned accommodation went up,

also

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till 2001, and was showing almost 70 per

cent

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. In 1953, fractions of rented one increased, owned felt, despite their trends.

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of the bar chart, after

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generally

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increase the percentage of households in owned accommodation declined

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nearly 5 per

cent

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and rented ones after

descending

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trend rose for

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ag

Banking and payment methods. The role of banks in the modern world. Large banks and their work. Working with clients.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.