The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ag

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.  ag
The bar chart represents information about households in owned and rented accommodations in England and Wales in the period from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the rented accommodations were popular at
first,
but it continued with a downward trend.
In addition
, the number of owned accommodations grew
up
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rapidly by having significant
difference
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with rented ones. In 1918 the percentage of owned accommodation was only more than 20 per
cent
, but
proportion
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of rented one was three times more approximately 78 per
cent
.
However
,
this
value generally decreased until 2001, in that year it was 31 per
cent
.
Moreover
proportion
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of owned accommodation went up,
also
till 2001, and was showing almost 70 per
cent
. In 1953, fractions of rented one increased, owned felt, despite their trends.
At the end
of the bar chart, after
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increase the percentage of households in owned accommodation declined
for
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nearly 5 per
cent
and rented ones after
descending
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trend rose for
few
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fractions.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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