The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ag
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The bar chart represents information about households in owned and rented accommodations in England and Wales in the period from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, the rented accommodations were popular at first,
but it continued with a downward trend. In addition
, the number of owned accommodations grew up
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