The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart provides information about customer
service
hotel
in 5 categories : Excellent, Satisfactory, Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
very poor
, Good and Correct your spelling
Very Poor
poor
between 2005 and 2010.
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Poor
Overall
, as can be seen, Satisfactory had a signaficant
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significant
portions
. Fix the agreement mistake
portion
while
,
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service
received a fewer
relatively Correct word choice
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proportion
. Correct word choice
lower proportion
However
,other types had different Patterns.
It is clear that
, in 2005, parkway
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Parkway Hotel
hotel
had a satisfactory level around
45% it was Change preposition
of around
a
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the
However
, it had spending
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spent
service
more
than in 2010Correct quantifier usage
apply
, .
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,
.
In addition
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had 5 points Add an article
The hotel
in
excellent Change preposition
for
service
.
On the other hand
, in 2010, There were significant shifts in hotel
service
. Costumer
love serving hotels had Correct your spelling
Customer
a good portions
under the 40%. Correct the article-noun agreement
a good portion
good portions
Secondly
, excellent
part was around a quarter more than Correct article usage
the excellent
befor
. Satisfactory and poor were nearly the same number from 12% to 17% Correct your spelling
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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