The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
forechart
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illustrates the
values
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of exports in
petroleum
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products
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, engineering goods,
gins
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and
jellies
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, agricultural
products
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,
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and textile
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textile
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textiles
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. In one country between 2015 and 2016, the table represents the percentage
change
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in
categories
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'
values
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.
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, all
categories
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witnessed an increase in their
values
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, except for
gins
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and
jellies
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. The most significant
change
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was in
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textile
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textiles
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and the least one in agricultural
products
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. The
petroleum
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product took the first place in its
value
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,
while
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the
textile
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came in
last
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place. In 2015, the
value
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of the
petroleum
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product was $65.00 per ounce, which was the biggest
value
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among other
categories
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. Engineered goods took the second-largest category in the same year, approximately 65.
Gins
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and
jellies
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and agricultural
products
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had 52 and 42 respectively,
while
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textile
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textiles
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was
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had
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the
least
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lowest
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exports
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export
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value
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in 2015
with
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at
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$35.00. By 2016, all
categories
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had increased their
exports
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export
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values
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, except for
gins
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and
jellies
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, which had decreased by 5.18% to become around 50. The highest
change
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was 15.24% in textiles to reach 43, which is the same
value
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of agricultural
products
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that increased
0.18
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by 0.18
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%.
Petroleum
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products
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and engineered goods
values
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change
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was 30.0% and 8.5% respectively to reach their
value
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about
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of about
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68.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words values, petroleum, products, gins, jellies, textile, change, categories, value with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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