The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
forechart
illustrates the Correct your spelling
forecourt
values
of exports in petroleum
products
, engineering goods, gins
and jellies
, agricultural products
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and textile
textile
. In one country between 2015 and 2016, the table represents the percentage Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
change
in categories
' values
.
Overall
, all categories
witnessed an increase in their values
, except for gins
and jellies
. The most significant change
was in textile
and the least one in agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
products
. The petroleum
product took the first place in its value
, while
the textile
came in last
place.
In 2015, the value
of the petroleum
product was $65.00 per ounce, which was the biggest value
among other categories
. Engineered goods took the second-largest category in the same year, approximately 65. Gins
and jellies
and agricultural products
had 52 and 42 respectively, while
textile
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textiles
was
the Verb problem
had
least
Correct word choice
lowest
exports
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export
value
in 2015 with
$35.00.
By 2016, all Change preposition
at
categories
had increased their exports
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export
values
, except for gins
and jellies
, which had decreased by 5.18% to become around 50. The highest change
was 15.24% in textiles to reach 43, which is the same value
of agricultural products
that increased 0.18
%. Change preposition
by 0.18
Petroleum
products
and engineered goods values
change
was 30.0% and 8.5% respectively to reach their value
about
68.Change preposition
of about
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Vocabulary: Replace the words values, petroleum, products, gins, jellies, textile, change, categories, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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