You are about to go on a vacation for a month. A friend from another town will come and stay in your apartment. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter •​Explain where your friend can get the key to the apartment- •​Give your friend some instructions about using your apartment Recommend some places to go

Dear Adam, How are you? I hope you’ve been well. I’m just writing to give
some
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you some
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information about my
apartment
, where you can stay as much time as you want to .
Well
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I’m going to Alberta tomorrow, which means that you’ll need to collect the keys from Mr. Smith. He lives in
apartment
36 on the same street and is a good friend of mine. I’ve already told him about you, making it easy for you to meet him and take the keys. Talking about some favour that I’d like you to do for me in the
apartment
, kindly switch on
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the solar
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panel connection from my drawing room every morning and switch it off in the evening.
This
is very important as the connection might
otherwise
start malfunctioning.
Apart from
this
, don’t play loud music after 11 pm as it disturbs neighbours. As for outings, I’d suggest you
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go to North Country Mall. There you’ll find all the stuff of your
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choice
as it has some traditional North-Indian showrooms. Don’t forget to hang out with your colleagues at “Pirates of Grills” just
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of the
apartment
/ Don’t forget to enjoy your
favorite
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tandoori dishes at “Pirates of Grills” just
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the backside
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of the
apartment
. Feel free to call anytime to ask anything about the
apartment
. Keep in touch. / See you soon. Harry
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task achievement
Include specific instructions for using the facilities in the apartment besides the solar panel switch.
coherence cohesion
Use clearer separators (paragraphs) for different sections of your letter to enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing provide a friendly and personal touch to the letter, enhancing its tone.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the task by addressing all the required points, such as key location, apartment instructions, and recommendations.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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