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Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent. Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter: – Describe the problem and why you are unhappy – Arrange for an engineer to visit your home – Request a reduction in your bil

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Dear Sir/Madam I hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the service I got from your
campany
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company
. My name is Navdeep and I live at 100 Street Edmonton.As I am
college
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a college
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 student
pursing
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 my Graduation from Macewan University I
had install
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 your
company
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 Wifi at my home.
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Last
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The last
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 day when I was working
for
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 my assignment your Wifi
stops
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 working . I tried my best to fix but I was unsuccessful. When I called
at
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customer support they
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also
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 unable to diagnose the problem.
Apart from
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, I want an
enginner
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engineer
 to visit my house and inspect my problem as soon as possible because I have to complete my college assignment
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 weekend.
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, as I faced
problem
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a problem
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 with your service I request you to give me a refund on
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month
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 bill because for
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last
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 few
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 not using your service. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side and hope you solve
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 matter on priority. Yours Sincerely, Navdeep
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suitable writing tone
Ensure the letter maintains a more formal tone throughout, especially in the opening paragraph.
complete response
Include details like how often the issue occurs and any previous efforts to resolve it to strengthen your complaint.
complete response
The letter successfully describes the problem, requesting an engineer's visit and a bill reduction.
single idea per paragraph
Paragraphs clearly address separate points: describing the issue, requesting an engineer, and asking for a refund.
greeting and closing
The letter includes a greeting and closing, making it appropriately structured for a formal letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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