The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below illustrates a likely future means of house

energy

manufacture.

Overall

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apply

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this

process

over

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is over

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6 steps and the first one is started

from

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removing the

gas

in compost ferments.

Firstly

, the

gas

is going to the storage where he is located for

further

action.

Subsequenly

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Subsequently

this

gas

moving

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compressor

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the compressor

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to fill a combustion engine.

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step

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needs

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understanding of physics because after

combustion

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the combustion

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engine

this

gas

have

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to transform into mechanical

energy

Following

this

step,

this

energy

goes to the generator, which can

transfrom

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transform

this

energy

from mechanical into electrical. Exactly,

this

type of power is used for houses. The final stage,

based

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on transforming electrical

energy

from

battery

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the battery

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to the house, so

home

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the home

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will be provided with

energy

from leaves, food and

scarps

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scraps

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

129 words

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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy life at the same time . What problems can this situation cause? What can be done about this problem?

Some people believe that to be successful at a sport, you need natural ability, ‎and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss ‎both views, and give your opinion?

Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Your friend from overseas is coming to visit you next month. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell them what they need to bring tell them what they will be doing during the time they are visiting warn them about some things that might be challenging