The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below illustrates a likely future means of house

energy

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manufacture.

Overall

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apply

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this

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process

over

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is over

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6 steps and the first one is started

from

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removing the

gas

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in compost ferments.

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, the

gas

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is going to the storage where he is located for

further

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action.

Subsequenly

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Subsequently

this

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gas

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moving

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moves

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compressor

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the compressor

a compressor

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to fill a combustion engine.

Second

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step

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apply

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needs

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understanding of physics because after

combustion

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the combustion

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engine

this

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gas

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have

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has

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to transform into mechanical

energy

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Following

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this

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step,

this

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energy

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goes to the generator, which can

transfrom

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transform

this

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energy

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from mechanical into electrical. Exactly,

this

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type of power is used for houses. The final stage,

based

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is based

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on transforming electrical

energy

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from

battery

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the battery

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to the house, so

home

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the home

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will be provided with

energy

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from leaves, food and

scarps

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scraps

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

129 words

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

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