The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by slecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates a likely future means of house
energy
manufacture. Overall
, in
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apply
this
process over
6 steps and the first one is started Add a missing verb
is over
from
removing the Change preposition
by
gas
in compost ferments.
Firstly
, the gas
is going to the storage where he is located for further
action. Subsequenly
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Subsequently
this
gas
moving
in Wrong verb form
moves
compressor
to fill a combustion engine.
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the compressor
a compressor
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stepChange the article
The second
,
needs Remove the comma
apply
in
understanding of physics because after Correct your spelling
an
combustion
engine Correct article usage
the combustion
this
gas
have
to transform into mechanical Change the verb form
has
energy
. Following
this
step, this
energy
goes to the generator, which can transfrom
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transform
this
energy
from mechanical into electrical. Exactly, this
type of power is used for houses. The final stage, based
on transforming electrical Add a missing verb
is based
energy
from battery
to the house, so Correct article usage
the battery
home
will be provided with Correct article usage
the home
energy
from leaves, food and scarps
.Correct your spelling
scraps
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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