The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruitd and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruitd and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The presented bar chart reveals the percentage of
men
, women, and
children
who consumed five portions of fruit and vegetables each day in The United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
,
women's
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women
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had the most consumption,
while
the opposite was for
children
. All three had an increasing trend throughout the year. In 2001, women had approximately 20%, and it gradually rose for the next 5
year
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years
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, before reaching its peak in 2006 at nearly 35%.
However
, it dropped by around 3% in the next year, followed by another decrease at the same number as in 2004.
On the other hand
,
Men
and
Children
started at 17% and 12 % respectively in 2001. Both remained static in 2002 and 2003 and steadily grew to their all-time high in 2007, except for
Men
which already peaked in 2006.
At the end
of the period,
Men
accounted for 26%,
while
children
was
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just slightly below them.
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