The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruitd and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The presented bar chart reveals the percentage of
men
, women, and Use synonyms
children
who consumed five portions of fruit and vegetables each day in The United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
women's
had the most consumption, Change noun form
women
while
the opposite was for Linking Words
children
. All three had an increasing trend throughout the year.
In 2001, women had approximately 20%, and it gradually rose for the next 5 Use synonyms
year
, before reaching its peak in 2006 at nearly 35%. Fix the agreement mistake
years
However
, it dropped by around 3% in the next year, followed by another decrease at the same number as in 2004.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Men
and Use synonyms
Children
started at 17% and 12 % respectively in 2001. Both remained static in 2002 and 2003 and steadily grew to their all-time high in 2007, except for Use synonyms
Men
which already peaked in 2006. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, Linking Words
Men
accounted for 26%, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
children
Use synonyms
was
just slightly below them.Change the verb form
were
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