You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.

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Dear manager, I am

writin

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writing

writin'

to bring the matter of

lefting

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leaving

wallet

on a flight

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your

airlines

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airline

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, to your attention. On the 20th of

sptember

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september

, I was returning from a

bissunes

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issues

trip from

Londen

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London

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, and after

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apply

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I had a long busy week I was very tired. When the plane landed in

the

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Manchester, I was

sleep

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asleep

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and the flight

asistant

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assistant

wake

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woke

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me up. Because of that and I was hurry to get

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apply

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home

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home,

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forgot

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left

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wallet

in the bag of

former

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my former

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seat . I need to tell you that

wallet

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my wallet

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is very important to me because there is

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a cople

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cople

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couple

of pictures of my family that have sentimental value for me.

Moreover

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if I

couldent

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couldn't

have my

wallet

again, I have to

cancell

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cancel

creadit

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credit

cards and apply for my driving licence again.

addition

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include

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a flash memory of my company

that

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where

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I stored my

last

project output, unless it

would be find

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is found

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, I have to work

for

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apply

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several days overtime. I would be

gratefull

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grateful

if your employees of that plane search for my

wallet

, and if they find it, send it to my

adrees

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address

in Manchester. I look forward to receiving your answer. Yours

faithfuly

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faithfully

, Javad Khammar.

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spelling

Ensure to use correct spelling to enhance readability (e.g., "business" instead of "bissunes").

sentence structure

Use connectors (e.g., because, therefore) effectively to improve sentence flow without using commas excessively.

grammar

Double-check for small typos and grammatical inaccuracies (e.g., "lefting" should be "leaving").

tone

Use a formal tone consistently in official correspondence.

clarity

Clear description of the situation and item left behind.

organization

Good structure in listing reasons why the item is important.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

205 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently returned from oversea by air and left a valuable item on the plane. Write a letter to the airline manager. In your letter .Describe the item you left behind .Say why it is important to you .Explain what you would like the airline manager to do Write at least 150 words.

The Closing

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are a important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate about whether people have the right to attend college so the governor should cover the tuition waiving. Meanwhile, from in my point of view, I do not consider myself an advocate of this idea.

I didn't have any nightmare travel experiences, but my friend has had such an experience.

In many countries nowadays,consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative?