You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter- -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work - say what you want the shop or company to do

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Hi Team, I'm reaching out to address an issue I have experiencing with the equipment which I have purchased from your shop. I'm a software developer and currently doing work from home. My work heavily relied on coding and typing.

However

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, some keys are not working properly

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the keyboard which directly

affecting

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the proactive of my work. I kindly request your assistance to resolve

this

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matter promptly by either

refund

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the

moeny

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money

replace

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replacing

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an item with an old one. I'm willing to

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take

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any action from my side. Best Regards Dhivya Ravi

dhivyaravi0396Mon Oct 28 2024

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coherence cohesion

The letter should maintain a single idea per paragraph to enhance clarity. Group related points together to make the letter easier to read and follow.

task achievement

Ensure that all your requests and information are clearly stated and justified. Describe how the non-functioning keys impact specific tasks in your job to provide a more complete picture.

task achievement

You've used a suitable and polite tone for a formal letter, and your intention is clear with specific requests.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate, contributing to a well-structured correspondence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

94 words

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