The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901
The table represents
the
information about how many Correct article usage
apply
employees
and factories
have
in England and Wales in a Wrong verb form
had
fivety-year
period between 1851 and 1901.
Correct your spelling
fifty-year
five-year
Overall
, as it is illustrated, there was a considerable upward trends
in the Change the noun form
trend
number
of factories
, while
the number
of an
average Correct article usage
apply
employees
saw a dramatic fall over the period. Also
, from the statistics of men and women ,who were employed by these factories
, it is noticeable that the number
of male workers
were
far more than the woman Change the verb form
was
employees
each year, despite 1861.
Initially
, the total number
of factories
started at 225 in 1851, and then
this
figure increased to a tiny 227 in 1861. However
, after that
there was a sharp rise to 622 in the next decade, and Add a comma
that,
then
the index fluctuated over the three decades, at which it levelled off at just 600 in 1901. Considering the number
of total workers
, the trend was opposite
. Starting from 477 100 the figure Correct article usage
the opposite
fall
dramatically to 291 780 in 1861,following that the Wrong verb form
fell
number
gradually went down and finished at 61 000 at the end
of the period.
Moving to the data about the number
of men and woman employees
in these factories
, at the beginning there were 287 100 male and 190 000 female workers
. The year 1861 marked a turning point, as a
Correct article usage
the
numbers
of both Correct the article-noun agreement
number
gender
began to fall sharply, to 131 780 male and 160 000 female Change to a plural noun
genders
employees
. Also
1861 was Add a comma
Also,
a
only year in which, the Correct article usage
the
number
of female workers
was greater compering
to the Correct your spelling
comparing
number
of male employees
. Consequently
, decreasing slightly the numbers finished the trend at 31 000 and 30 000 employed men and woman
.Fix the agreement mistake
women
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