The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts provide information about the average rate of
water
usage for different reasons
in particular
six
regions
across the globe.
Overall
, industrial usage is trendier in the European and North American
regions
than other fields
while
agriculture has been the topmost priority in case of using
water
in the Central and South East Asian
regions
along with
the African region.
However
,
due to
heavy industrialization, Europe and Northern
America
spend most of their
water
supplies in the industrial areas which are 53% and 48% respectively, opposite to the Central Asian region, which uses only 5%
water
Change preposition
of water
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for
this
purpose.
On the other hand
, both parts of Asia and Africa
along with
South
America
utilize a significant amount of
water
supply for agricultural purposes which are 88%, 81%, 84% and 71% respectively as agriculture has been the main priority for these
regions
from the beginning. Meanwhile, the lowest rate of
water
used in domestic chores is in both parts of Asia which is 7% followed by Africa, North
America
, South
America
and Europe which are 9%, 13%, 15% and 19% respectively.
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  • water usage
  • agriculture
  • industrial use
  • domestic consumption
  • energy production
  • recreation
  • regions
  • sectors
  • overall
  • accounts for
  • ranging from
  • relatively low
  • in contrast
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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