The graph below depicts the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts below shows how electricity is used in an average home in the same country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make cmparison where relevant.
The graph emphasizes the usage of
electricity
in both winter and summer times while
the pie chart focuses on the utilization of electricity
in a typical house in England.
Overall
, the usage of electricity
reaches a peak during the last
hours in the hot and mid hours on chilly days whereas
most of the electricity
tends to be used for keeping the rooms and water warm.
During winter, the highest demand for electricity
is in the last
three hours of the night which is shy of 50,000 units because of extreme cold. On the other hand
, slightly above 30,000 units are used in the early morning between 6 and 9 am, which is, somehow, the lowest in case of usage. Meanwhile, the summertime shows a more linear demand line compared to the winter where the peak hour is seen between the 12th and 15th hour when demand surges to 20,000 units.
Furthermore
, more than 52% of electricity
is used for heating rooms and water. Kitchen appliances like ovens kettles and washing machine
use 17.5% current Fix the agreement mistake
machines
while
15% electricity
is used for operating lights, TV, and radio and the other 15% is used for keeping household machines like vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools active.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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