You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, •explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute •mention what problems you have encountered with parking •what you recommend to solve the problems
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter about bicycle
parking not find. I have one of high
price Correct article usage
the high
bicycle
for Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
verious
needs. Correct your spelling
various
thats
are, I am using Correct your spelling
That's
Correct article usage
a bicycal
bicycal
Correct your spelling
bicycle
bicycles
for
Change preposition
to
go
to work, shops and Change the verb form
going
morning
Add a missing verb
do morning
excercice
. these are my daily Correct your spelling
exercise
exercises
rotine
works. Correct your spelling
routine
some time
I use Correct your spelling
Sometimes
bicycle
suddenlyCorrect article usage
a bicycle
needs
.
Verb problem
apply
moreover
, when i
use Change the capitalization
I
this
bicycle
I have some problems. I did not fine
your building parking for stant Correct your spelling
find
bicycle
, some time
anybody uninformed to take to ride my Correct your spelling
sometimes
this
bicycle
therefore
, I have to face many Add the comma(s)
, therefore
problem
me and my family. Change to a plural noun
problems
although
, I was selfly manage
and Wrong verb form
managed
control
.
Wrong verb form
controlled
Lastly
, you have to inform to
me where is Change preposition
apply
bicycle
parking area here. I want to know about that palce
. I suggest to you if you show Correct your spelling
place
this
area infront
of building Correct your spelling
in front
out side
. Correct your spelling
outside
userse
can get clarification about Correct your spelling
Users
bicycle
parking. and you will appoint one of security to consider this
work.
I expect your valuvable
reply.
Correct your spelling
valuable
Youre
Correct your spelling
You're
faithully
RaamCorrect your spelling
faithfully
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Check for spelling and grammatical errors to improve overall coherence and readability.
task achievement
Ensure the letter addresses all bullet points effectively by providing more specific details and examples.
task achievement
The letter clearly mentions the reason for commuting by bicycle, the parking issues faced, and suggestions for improvement.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately included in the letter, giving it a formal tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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