You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter, •explain the reason for using a  bicycle to commute •mention what problems you have encountered with parking •what you recommend to solve the problems

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter about
bicycle
parking not find. I have one of
high
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price
bicycle
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bicycles
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for
verious
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various
needs.
thats
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are, I am using
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a bicycal
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bicycal
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bicycle
bicycles
for
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to
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go
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to work, shops and
morning
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do morning
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excercice
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exercise
exercises
. these are my daily
rotine
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routine
works.
some time
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Sometimes
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I use
bicycle
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a bicycle
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suddenly
needs
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apply
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.
moreover
, when
i
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I
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use
this
bicycle
I have some problems. I did not
fine
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find
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your building parking for stant
bicycle
,
some time
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sometimes
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anybody uninformed to take to ride my
this
bicycle
therefore
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, I have to face many
problem
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me and my family.
although
, I was selfly
manage
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managed
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and
control
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controlled
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.
Lastly
, you have to inform
to
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me where is
bicycle
parking area here. I want to know about that
palce
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place
. I suggest to you if you show
this
area
infront
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in front
of building
out side
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outside
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.
userse
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Users
can get clarification about
bicycle
parking. and you will appoint one of security to consider
this
work. I expect your
valuvable
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valuable
reply.
Youre
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You're
faithully
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faithfully
Raam
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coherence cohesion
Try to improve logical structure by organizing ideas clearly, using paragraphs effectively, and connecting sentences more cohesively.
coherence cohesion
Check for spelling and grammatical errors to improve overall coherence and readability.
task achievement
Ensure the letter addresses all bullet points effectively by providing more specific details and examples.
task achievement
The letter clearly mentions the reason for commuting by bicycle, the parking issues faced, and suggestions for improvement.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately included in the letter, giving it a formal tone.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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