The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart, which depicts in great detail, illustrates the number of
men
and women in six age
groups
who exercised in Australia in 2010. The unit is based on percentage.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that in all age
groups
how many females
that did physical activity Change preposition
of females
were
more than the number of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
males
, except age
Correct article usage
the age
group
15 to 24.
To commence with, the percentage of Australian males
and females that did regular physical activity were as follow: in age
group
25 to 34; males
(42.2%)-females(48.9%), in age
groups
35 to 44; men
(39.5%)-women(52.5%), in age
group
45 to 54; males
(43.1%)-females(53.3%), in age
group
55 to 64; men
(45.1%)- women(53%) as well as
in age
group
65 and over; males
(46.7%)-females(47.1%). Thus
, the number of women were
more than how many Correct subject-verb agreement
was
men
in
did physical activity.
On the flip side, unlike other Correct word choice
apply
age
groups
in age
Add an article
the age
group
15 to 24 the amount of males
were
more than the proportion of femalesCorrect subject-verb agreement
was
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, age, groups, males, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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