The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates people aged 23-65 percentage in various occupations
Uk
as a
in Ashby and in the whole in 2008. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that office work
in the UK
had the highest amount of the occupations. However
, construction work
was seen as the lowest proportion during the given period.
Observing the chart in more detail. Office work
had the largest figure with around 19% in the UK
. Another point to be noticed is that Personal service and technical work
were the second number in the UK
accounting for 17%.
In contrast
, the number of people in Ashby was seen as the lowest in E Professional work
about 8%, One Striking piece of information to be considered is that both Professional work
in the UK
and shop work
in Ashby had an equal amount of approximately 14%.Submitted by 13570581 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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