In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the country side and not build home there. What is your opinion?

Undoubtedly, many cities are crowded around the world.They need many new

strucutions

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instructions

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not find space for them.They can build them only in

countryside

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the countryside

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.

While

some

people

believe that,No body should construct

building

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a building

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in

countryside

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the countryside

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to protect it.I will discuss in

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essay both viewpoints and my personal opinion.

To begin

with,There are many

people

need

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to build

flat

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a flat

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or apartment for their family.They want

clean

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a clean

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and suitable

place

.If all the

people

build

building

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buildings

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in

on

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one

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space

this

will

causes

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many problems.

For instance

,congestion and pollution.

In

addition

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the view of

place

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the place

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will become very ugly.They will not be

arrangement

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.In my opinion,They should all

for

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citizens to

built

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build

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in

countryside

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the countryside

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.I think

is

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it

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is their right.Engineers should

put

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make

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plans to make new

building

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buildings

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without

harm

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harming

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the

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apply

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nature

.

However

,

countryside

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the countryside

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has

a

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apply

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beautiful

nature

and

landscape

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landscapes

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.Some

people

don

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not like to make

building

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buildings

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there because of many reasons.

For example

,They will cut many trees and plants to make space for roads and buildings.

In addition

,animals will not feel comfortable because there will be a narrow area for them.

Also

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country side

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countryside

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is a

place

for

relax

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relaxation

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and enjoyment.

For

example

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example,

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many visitors like to go there to reduce their stress and enjoy

with

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apply

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nature

and

sound

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the sound

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of birds.

To conclude

,There should

make

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be

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place

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a place

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for building and

take

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taking

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care of

nature

.They can

do

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build

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buildings in

countryside

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the countryside

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with out

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without

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harm

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harming

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any creatures.Good plans for

constructions

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construction

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will make all

people

satisfied.