The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates various steps about how to make carbonated drinks. There are five stages starting with
water
cleaning and ending with packaging.
At
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In
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the beginning, after filtering the
water
, it goes through
water
softener and chemicals.
Then
, it used electric heaters and it moved
Rom
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the Rom
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cooling pipe causing the emission of Carbon dioxide. In the
thired
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third
proces
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process
, carbonated
water
in
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is in
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tank
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the tank
a tank
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.
Subsequently
, the filter can in are mixed be
shaped
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and shaped
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twe
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two
way
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ways
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: either it
ons
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is
as bottles, or it can
be cans
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be canned
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. The final step is Packaging and
take
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taking
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it to the supermarket.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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