The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates various steps about how to make carbonated drinks. There are five stages starting with
water
cleaning and ending with packaging.
At
the beginning, after filtering the Change the preposition
In
water
, it goes through water
softener and chemicals. Then
, it used electric heaters and it moved Rom
cooling pipe causing the emission of Carbon dioxide.
In the Correct article usage
the Rom
thired
Correct your spelling
third
proces
, carbonated Correct your spelling
process
water
in
Add a missing verb
is in
tank
. Add an article
the tank
a tank
Subsequently
, the filter can in are mixed be shaped
Correct word choice
and shaped
twe
Correct your spelling
two
way
: either it Fix the agreement mistake
ways
ons
as bottles, or it can Correct your spelling
is
be cans
. The final step is Packaging and Change the verb form
be canned
take
it to the supermarket.Wrong verb form
taking
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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