The line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.

The line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.
The following graph provides data on the number of populations of 4 different age groups who went to the cinema hall at least once or many times in a month in Europe during the timeline 1984 to 2003.
Overall
, teenagers tended to go to matinee shows more than others
whereas
people of 35 years or above appeared least as audience. Surprisingly, the number of children audiences was just beneath the teenagers in case of watching cinemas over the time period. Teenagers,
however
, had been the most frequent customers of the cinema halls from the beginning of the timeline with a shy 20%.
This
trend saw a fluctuation between 1992 and 2000 and
then
rocketed more than 50%
at the end
of 2003.
On the other hand
, the juvenile group started with a proportion of 10%, showed ups and downs, and settled at 30%
finally
whereas
, the people between 25 and 35 finished with the same percentage
although
they were close to 5% at the beginning of 1984.
Nevertheless
, The most aged group were 35 years or above who showed the least interest in going to the cinema from the starting point with almost 0% but the number continued to rise from 1988 and finished at the mark over 10%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cinema attendance
  • age groups
  • line graph
  • trend
  • frequency
  • once a month
  • comparative analysis
  • peak attendance
  • fluctuations
  • decline
  • increase
  • youth demographic
  • elderly viewers
  • decade
  • millennium
  • recreational habits
  • entertainment industry
  • consumer behavior
  • box office
  • crowd-favorite
  • blockbuster releases
  • market dynamics
  • digital revolution
  • streaming services
  • cultural shifts
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