The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T1 Bar Charts - EducationT
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The charts illustrate the population of
men
and Use synonyms
women
who studied in Use synonyms
further
education and give the information of whether they were studying full-time or part-time in Britain in three separate periods.
It is remarkable that most of the males and females studied part-time Linking Words
instead
of full-time during those times. Linking Words
While
there was a fluctuation in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
between 800 and 1000, the figure for Use synonyms
women
climbed steadily and reached about 1100 Use synonyms
people
in 1990.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
who studied full-time both showed a growth in these three periods, as both males and females attained nearly 300 individuals in 1990. Use synonyms
Although
the statistics are still significantly less than the other parts of Linking Words
people
.
In summary, there was an obvious gap between the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who studied part-time and the population of Use synonyms
people
who engaged in full-time studying shown by the figures of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
of part-time education had changed little, the statistics of full-time education had increased gradually.Use synonyms
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