The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. ag

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.  ag
bar chart depicts the modification in the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales over a 100-year period, starting from 1918.
Overall
, it can be seen all of the lines have two similar trends downward and upward between 1918 and 2011. The first trend has shown households in owned
that is
an upward trend
while
opposite from
this
trend related to households in rented accommodation and downwards. Regarding the two trends mentioned in the first statement, the owned statics line has the peak percentage in 2001,
that is
nearly 70%
however
people have bottomed and a bit more than 30%.
This
situation is shown in the bar chart for rented accommodation
for example
in 1918 over 80% of all people had to rent a home but a little above 20% were rich and could buy a home.
finally
, it bar chart shows a true policy by the government because many people have a home today and
this
is a safe parameter of a good life.
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