Task 1 You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: -describe your experience -tell him why you are interested in the job -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I am looking for

part time

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a part-time

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job

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in your

restaurant

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and I find me compatible for

this

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job

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. I worked a lot in many sectors

such

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as in

retail

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the retail

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area

as well as

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restaurant

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the restaurant

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area. I had a position of sales manager in

retail

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a retail

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store for 3 years. Currently, I

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have been

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working as a host in a

restaurant

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for approx 1 year.

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, I want to apply for a bartender position in your

restaurant

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because just

few

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a few

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days back I

recived

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received

my bar license and

finding

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found

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job

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for

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bar

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a bar

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person as it will give me a chance to show my work in your

restaurant

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. I

also

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hear many reputed things about your

restaurant

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thats

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that's

that

why I am interested to work here. I find

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myself

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compatible because as I told you

that

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apply

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I am currently working as a host so basically I have

restaurant

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experience and mainly I have the most important bar license for

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respected

job

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. Yours Faithfully, Simranjeet Kur

yuvrajsinghsaggu200703Sat Nov 02 2024

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coherence cohesion

Provide clearer transitions between paragraphs to enhance flow.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea for improved clarity.

task achievement

Elaborate more on why your experience makes you suitable for the job.

coherence cohesion

The letter includes a proper greeting and closing, which enhances its professionalism.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is suitable for a job application, reflecting professionalism and interest.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enthusiastic application
hospitality sector
culinary arts
reliability
work under pressure
excellent customer service
flexibility in working hours
eagerness
part-time position
relevant experience
team player
communication skills
attention to detail

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Task 1 You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: -describe your experience -tell him why you are interested in the job -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in a country where you must speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement

Some people feel that they must pay high taxes are necessary so that the government will have enough money to give good public services to society. others disagree.

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.