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You have a full time job and also doing part time evening course, You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. -Describe the situation. -Explain why you can not continue at this time. -Say what action you would like to take.

#time #job #part #course #tutor #-describe #situation #-explain #-say #action
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the
course
. I am Raam, I am
a
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one of 2nd year
Dipoloma
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Diploma
 in English
coures
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courses
course
 in your institute. my
registation
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registration
 number is AL/22/2022. I was
continu
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continued
this
course
 class from
registation
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registration
 to
untill
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until
 now.
Moreover
, I
am
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following
this
coure
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course
from
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registation
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registration
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untill
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until
last
 semester but now I can not continue to follow
this
course
 reson for my
family
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 financial situation is very critical
therefore
, I am doing full-time and part-time
course
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continusly
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continuously
. so I have
not
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 time to continue
this
course
.
Lastly
,
youre
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you
 know my family situation and I am. I do not know how to follow
this
course
. I am learning all
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cntinisly
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constantly
. If you allow for the semester exam without
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attendance
. I sure pass the all semester. I expect your
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valuable
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valuable
 reply soon Yours Faithfully Raam
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coherence and cohesion
To improve coherence, organize your ideas into clear and separate paragraphs for each point.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea to enhance the logical structure.
task achievement
Provide specific details about whether you want to resume later or any assistance needed.
language
Avoid grammatical errors and ensure all sentences are complete to achieve better clarity.
task achievement
The letter expresses a clear and polite request, maintaining a suitable tone throughout.
coherence and cohesion
Greetings and closing are appropriately structured, which adds to the formality of the letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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