You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of UK citizen's expenditure on
Food
and
drinks
,
Restaurants
and
hotels
, and entertainment in various
age
groups in the year 2004.
Overall
, the British
people
spent most of their money on
food
and
drinks
regardless of
age
except youth, tend to spend on
restaurants
and
hotels
in the given period. Noticeably, as the
age
increased, consumption of
food
and
drinks
exhibited a consistent growth
whereas
restaurants
and
hotels
accounted for the reverse trend.
According to
the graph, the young
people
of the UK spent more on
restaurants
and
hotels
which was slightly less than 15 %, and for
food
and
drinks
, and entertainment , total spending ranged between 5-10 percentage.
Furthermore
, entertainment reached a peak of around 23 % in the
age
group of senior citizens , before falling to less than 15 % in
people
older than 75
years
in 2004.
However
, the total spending on
restaurants
and
hotels
decreased to 2 % in the late middle-aged category and after 75
years
, it climbed to 7%.
Additionally
, the expenditure on
food
and
drinks
gradually increased to 23-24 % above 75
years
old
people
from 7% in the
age
less than 30
years
during the given year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drinks, restaurants, hotels, age, people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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