The tables below give information about the consumption and production of potatoes in different world regions in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two given tables provide information about the
amount
of Use synonyms
potato
produced and consumed in five different regions across the world in the year Fix the agreement mistake
potatoes
of
2006. Change preposition
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Overall
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number of
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consumption
of Use synonyms
potatoes
in Use synonyms
Europe
was significantly higher than Use synonyms
other
regions. Change preposition
in other
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, the Linking Words
amount
of Use synonyms
potatoes
consumed in Asia Use synonyms
and
Oceania, and Correct word choice
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Europe
were the highest Use synonyms
number
.
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According to
the first table, the highest Linking Words
number
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consumption
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potatoes
belonged to Use synonyms
Europe
at 96.1 kilograms for each person, Use synonyms
this
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number
was followed by the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
potatoes
consumed individually in North Use synonyms
America
, which was 57.9 kilograms. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the figure for the Linking Words
consumption
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this
vegetable in Asia and Oceania, and South and Central Linking Words
America
was much lower, which was only 25.8 kg and 23.6 kg Use synonyms
for
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per
a
person, respectively. Correct article usage
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Additionally
, Africa had Linking Words
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a
significant
low Change the word
significantly
consumption
of Use synonyms
potatoes
in 2006, at only 14.1 kilograms per person
Turning into the second table, the production of the potato industry in Asia Use synonyms
and
Oceania, and Correct word choice
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Europe
was the most productive, with the Use synonyms
amount
of potato produced was 131.2 Use synonyms
million
and 126.3 Use synonyms
million
in 2006, respectively. Use synonyms
Meanwhile
the Add a comma
Meanwhile,
number
of Use synonyms
potatoes
produced in North Use synonyms
America
was only 24.7 Use synonyms
million
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during
2006. Change preposition
in
Similarly
, the figure for the production of Linking Words
potatoes
in Africa and South and Central Use synonyms
America
was 16.4 Use synonyms
million
and 15.6 Use synonyms
million
, respectively.Use synonyms
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