The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the mean
retirement
age
of males
and females
, which were available in 6 countries
(Australia, United States, Japan, Italy, France
, and Korea) in the year 2003.
Overall
, Korean job holders get retirement
later, whereas
in France
it was earlier than the other countries
. On the other hand
, women
's quit from job age
was on average 1 year lower in all countries
.
The highest retirement
age
was in Korea at 68 years
and 8 months
for men, whereas
for women
it was 67 years
and 2 months
. The lowest retirement
age
could be seen in France
at 57 years
and 4 months
for males
, for women
it was less than 3 months
from 57 years
. France
's retirement
age
was almost 10 years
faster than the other 5 countries
. In Australia, women
retired at the age
of 63 years
and 5 months
, however
, for males
it was just above 64 years
. Japan and Italy shared the same age
retirement
time for both males
and females
, which was 67 years
and 4 months
for males
, and 66 years
and 9 months
for females
. For the USA, it was in the middle position among all countries
, where it was 64 years
and 2 months
for females
, and 65 years
and half a year for males
.Submitted by zobaermasum12 on
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