Task 1 The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The illustration depicts the manufacturing steps of carbonated

bevarages

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beverages

.

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, at the beginning of stage one, raw

water

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from random sources

are

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is

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collected and filtered and

then

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the

water

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reaches

to

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apply

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a compartment filled with

water

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softeners and chemicals. The

water

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gets treated and

then

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gets pumped to the electric heaters to initiate the second stage where the

water

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heating process begins to kill a wide range of microorganisms.

Then

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, through a cooling pipe,

water

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enters

to

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a compartment after evaporation where carbon dioxide is added

with

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to

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water

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in order to make it carbonated. Moving on, the third stage, which is mixing takes place

where

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when

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the carbonated

water

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enters

into

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apply

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a mixing tank, gets combined with colouring agents, syrups and different flavours and the components are

then

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mixed vigorously.

Then

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, the final filtration is done

in

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at

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the beginning of the second

last

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step and

then

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bottles made of different materials or aluminium cans get filled with the final product coming after mixing.

Finally

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, the beverage cans and bottles get packed and they become ready to quench the thirst of the customers.

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, there are five stages for the production of soft drinks which

starts

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start

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by

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with

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cleaning the

water

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and

ended

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ends

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by

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with

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the distribution of cans and bottles in the supermarkets maintaining a particular chain.