Task 1 The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The illustration depicts the manufacturing steps of carbonated
bevarages
.
Correct your spelling
beverages
However
, at the beginning of stage one, raw water
from random sources are
collected and filtered and Correct subject-verb agreement
is
then
the water
reaches to
a compartment filled with Change preposition
apply
water
softeners and chemicals. The water
gets treated and then
gets pumped to the electric heaters to initiate the second stage where the water
heating process begins to kill a wide range of microorganisms. Then
, through a cooling pipe, water
enters to
a compartment after evaporation where carbon dioxide is added Change preposition
apply
with
Change preposition
to
water
in order to make it carbonated.
Moving on, the third stage, which is mixing takes place where
the carbonated Correct word choice
when
water
enters into
a mixing tank, gets combined with colouring agents, syrups and different flavours and the components are Change preposition
apply
then
mixed vigorously.
Then
, the final filtration is done in
the beginning of the second Change the preposition
at
last
step and then
bottles made of different materials or aluminium cans get filled with the final product coming after mixing. Finally
, the beverage cans and bottles get packed and they become ready to quench the thirst of the customers.
Overall
, there are five stages for the production of soft drinks which starts
Correct subject-verb agreement
start
by
cleaning the Change preposition
with
water
and ended
Wrong verb form
ends
by
the distribution of cans and bottles in the supermarkets maintaining a particular chain.Change preposition
with
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