he chart below shows the percentage change in share of international grduates in different canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comaprisions where relevant

he chart below shows  the percentage change in share of international grduates in different canadian provinces  between 2001 and 2006.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main futures and make comaprisions where relevant
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chart below gives information about the percentage change in the share of international student
graduates
in different Canadian universities between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
correspondingly to the given data we can say that the average percentage of international
students
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from Canadian universities in 2001 was approximately 5% and in 2006, it increased to almost 10%.
To begin
, in 2001 provinces
such
as New Brunswick, Nova Scotia and Quebec had higher international
graduates
than other regions. As follows states had more than 5% overseas degree holders.
Furthermore
, Manitoba and Newfoundland higher education institutes had nearly 5% of foreign
graduates
.
In addition
, Ontario had the lowest number of foreign
students
with the amount of approximately 3% of
graduates
. As can be expected in 2006 the international licensed
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proportion significantly increased.
in other words
, graduate numbers in New Brunswick and Nova Scotia have risen to over 10%. On the whole, all regions had shown a marginal peak of international
graduates
, especially British Colombia with rapid growth from 3% to over 10%. Taking everything into consideration in 2006 Canadian provinces got more popular among overseas
students
.
Moreover
, New Brunswick and Nora Scotia have maintained their place as demanded areas among foreigners,
as well as
British Columbia has rocketed
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