Task 1 The diagram details the process by which carbonated drinks are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The supplied process indicates how carbonated drinks are produced by several steps in factories.
Overall
, there are five stages starting from cleaning Linking Words
water
and finishing with packaging drinks and delivering them to supermarkets.
First of all, the raw Use synonyms
water
is moved to the process in order to be filtered and softened with chemicals and Use synonyms
also
be cleaned. Linking Words
The next step is
pumping the cleaned Linking Words
water
to electric heaters so as to heat it. Once the heated Use synonyms
water
has been put Use synonyms
to
the cooling pipe, the carbon dioxide is Change preposition
into
then
added to the container. Linking Words
This
stage is called heating evaporation and carbonation and the carbonated Linking Words
water
is created. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the carbonated Linking Words
water
is transformed into the mixing tank with the help of a thin and long pipe.
The following stage is Use synonyms
that
the carbonated Correct word choice
when
water
is mixed with the flavour, syrup and colouring and Use synonyms
produced
the mixed drink. After the carbonated Wrong verb form
produces
water
has been mixed, it is Use synonyms
then
filtered in order to be cleaned again. Afterwards, the mixed Linking Words
water
is poured into the bottles and cans in various sizes. The final step is packaging bottles and cans and delivering them to supermarkets with trucks so that drinks can be sold in the shops.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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